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#265of 3,515 in 2024
Top 8%of 2024 by points
How HN took it
MixedNo clear lean
13 positive, 24 neutral or asking, 9 mixed, 12 critical, out of 58 comments about the project. Thread score +0.07.
Design: 1 for, 7 againstIdea: 6 for, 1 againstExecution: 1 for, 4 against
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What HN said
What people liked
Realistic, painful frustration that is funny and well designed
From 4 comments
I had the pleasure of trying this out before it was released. I think it's one of those things I can imagine might have a high bounce rate, but I would really like to encourage…
j0hnyl on HNI hate it so, so much. Excellent job.
Sirikon on HNI regret there is not a merciful option like "wait for death in a corner". Great job! I had fun and got bored to death at the same time.
brumar on HNA few comments: 1. It’s not very fun on iOS, especially because crypto mining makes the screen zoom in and it’s no good. Also the sound for the phone doesn’t work so that’s a big…
KTallguy on HN
Evokes Kafka, Dark Room and Universal Paperclips
From 3 comments
What a Kafkaesque game.
CaptainFever on HNThe reminds me a lot of a dark room! Awesome game thanks for the adventure!
yesthisiswes on HNA Dark Room is great! I started playing it a lot mid way through developing this. That and Universal Paperclips are the gold standards of minimalist web-based games.
scyclow on HN
Many details and easter eggs
From 1 comment
I had the pleasure of trying this out before it was released. I think it's one of those things I can imagine might have a high bounce rate, but I would really like to encourage…
j0hnyl on HN
Objections
Too frustrating and tedious, especially account creation and phone number entry
From 4 comments
I played for a while on my phone but gave up because it's too much hassle to remember and enter things like phone numbers and passwords. I know that's kind of the point, but I…
esperent on HNThis is too realistic. I became annoyed after 5 minutes.
butz on HNI bailed at create an account.
tensor on HNSame. Luckily, you only need to provide a name. Still gave up at the next form. I don't even know what I "played".
addandsubtract on HN
Mobile and sound bugs, including text-to-speech and freezing
From 4 comments
"The phone app appears to use text-to-speech based on the device's locale. On my laptop, it's speaking English with the worst French accent imaginable
maille on HNGreat game. Only issue, phone freezes now when I try to open it. Blank screen. I am kind of far, have all the money/coins, still missing some big picture stuff though. Here are…
kramer5252 on HNhttps://smarthome.steviep.xyz/voices.js(3): Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'cancel') Android 10, generic WebView browser (mobile chrome works)
dvh on HNIs something supposed to happen when I call a number on the phone? If the number picks up I just have silence until I hang up. Also I made the mistake of resetting the phone in…
macshome on HN
Softlock in the stairwell
From 2 comments
loved the game until I entered the stairwell and was not able to proceed or go back. Having this as a softlock is sad, especially since this could be a continuation of the story…
ctm92 on HNAnyone know how to get out of the stairwell? The floors seem infinite. It seems like that is actually the end. 02:34:39
astonex on HN
Requests
Automatic text fields and easier account creation
From 1 comment
I played for a while on my phone but gave up because it's too much hassle to remember and enter things like phone numbers and passwords. I know that's kind of the point, but I…
esperent on HN
Better mobile support, including zoom and sound
From 1 comment
A few comments: 1. It’s not very fun on iOS, especially because crypto mining makes the screen zoom in and it’s no good. Also the sound for the phone doesn’t work so that’s a big…
KTallguy on HN
Add a reset option for progress
From 1 comment
Is it possible to reset progress somehow?
saw-lau on HN
Questions
Is the stairwell a softlock?
From 1 comment
But are the stairs a softlock?
ctm92 on HN
Why does new text appear at the top?
From 1 comment
Very unusual that new text appears at the top. Is there any specific reason why you chose to do it this way? I played for a bit but the frustration soon became too real, haha :-D
Max-q on HN
Is it possible to reset progress?
From 1 comment
Is it possible to reset progress somehow?
saw-lau on HN
Alternatives named
A Dark Room
From 2 comments
The reminds me a lot of a dark room! Awesome game thanks for the adventure!
yesthisiswes on HNA Dark Room is great! I started playing it a lot mid way through developing this. That and Universal Paperclips are the gold standards of minimalist web-based games.
scyclow on HN
Universal Paperclips
From 1 comment
A Dark Room is great! I started playing it a lot mid way through developing this. That and Universal Paperclips are the gold standards of minimalist web-based games.
scyclow on HN
Bureaucracy
From 1 comment
ooh - deliciously painful. I love these things, even if I can't commit more than 10min before the pain makes me stop. Strong vibes of Douglas Adams' game Bureaucracy -…
neumann on HN