Tranquillity

Creative

poetry writing tool

SHOW HN2012

398points
113comments
#21of 1,677 in 2012
Top 2%of 2012 by points

How HN took it

MixedNo clear lean

28 positive, 30 neutral or asking, 10 mixed, 11 critical, out of 79 comments about the project. Thread score +0.24.

Idea: 11 for, 5 againstDesign: 2 for, 3 againstExecution: 0 for, 2 againstPerformance: 0 for, 1 against

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What HN said

What people liked

  • Simple, well-made, fun to use

    From 3 comments
    • It thinks "false" is two syllables, which seems to be just a dictionary problem. For something like this, those need to be very diligently squashed if you plan to make something…
      benaiah on HN
    • Very nice! Inviting and obvious UI, immediate feedback, this is great stuff. Any plans for this project? And to top it all off, I can't stop reading that placeholder poem in…
      Groxx on HN
    • This is great. Thanks for posting it. I had some trouble with the syllable counts, but this is really useful for, well, quickly writing rhyming poetry. Good work.
      TravisLS on HN
  • Useful for quick rhyming poetry

    From 2 comments
    • This is great. Thanks for posting it. I had some trouble with the syllable counts, but this is really useful for, well, quickly writing rhyming poetry. Good work.
      TravisLS on HN
    • My first thought "whoa: this is an IDE for songwriters" I'll use the shit out of it!
      tomasien on HN

Objections

  • Syllable counting errors on some words

    From 4 comments
    • It thinks "false" is two syllables, which seems to be just a dictionary problem. For something like this, those need to be very diligently squashed if you plan to make something…
      benaiah on HN
    • The syllable count fails on some words. For example "naïve". If you can't trust the program to count syllables at least as reliably as the writer using it, what use is it?…
      Thrall on HN
    • That's pretty nice, I like it. The syllable counter throws an error when you type a line with the word "Watch" in it though. I have some lyrics I need to write at some point…
      pre on HN
    • Very nice. I noticed an irregularity in the dictionary though – for some reason "farewell" is seen as having 3 syllables when it only has 2. (At least the way I pronounce it...)
      Kronopath on HN
  • Rhyming features not useful for modern poetry

    From 2 comments
    • This is really interesting, and a beautiful little project. Unfortunately, I don't think it will be of any use to actual poets... Rhyming isn't really in style for modern poetry,…
      lukev on HN
    • I hate to be a naysayer but I'm not sure how helpful this would be to your average poet. Things like rhyme and meter counts are rarely involved in early drafts of poems. If…
      MrDrone on HN
  • Editor too small and layout distracting

    From 2 comments
    • It thinks "false" is two syllables, which seems to be just a dictionary problem. For something like this, those need to be very diligently squashed if you plan to make something…
      benaiah on HN
    • If you're looking for suggestions: If you really want people to use this as a writing tool, make the interface itself more tranquil - the "Tranquillity" title is distracting, and…
      oulipian on HN

Requests

  • Save and user accounts for poems

    From 2 comments
    • This is something we didn't get to at the hackathon. I agree that this is a feature that needs to be there. We plan on implementing a user system where people can save their…
      bilalq on HN
    • Thanks! That's sound advice. We don't plan on adding more features than necessary. A user system with sharing and persistence of poems should be sufficient.
      bilalq on HN
  • Meter and preset rhyme schemes

    From 2 comments
    • It'd be really cool if a) you added meter and b) you added preset rhyme / meter schemes like "Sonnet"
      neutronicus on HN
    • Would be great if you could detect the rhyme scheme, or set it as fixed.
      forkrulassail on HN
  • Alternate dictionaries or languages

    From 2 comments
    • What's really missing is a language choice. A switchable dictionary would be great.
      wazoox on HN
    • ``` I have a simply query, is there a way to replace the dictionary? the language I would like to change for me, Klingon poetry is too strange ```
      speleding on HN

Questions

  • What API or dataset provides rhymes

    From 1 comment
    • This is wonderful! What API/dataset are you using for the rhymes?
      feniv on HN

Alternatives named

  • iA Writer

    From 1 comment
    • I hate to be a naysayer but I'm not sure how helpful this would be to your average poet. Things like rhyme and meter counts are rarely involved in early drafts of poems. If…
      MrDrone on HN
  • Google Drive

    From 1 comment
    • I hate to be a naysayer but I'm not sure how helpful this would be to your average poet. Things like rhyme and meter counts are rarely involved in early drafts of poems. If…
      MrDrone on HN

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